SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS from a Screenwriter's point of view! in Sacramento, California For Sale

Need help with plot, story, structure, conflict, character, dialogue, description, goals, motivation, tone, etc. I can show you how to avoid common mistakes so the script reader can't wait to turn the pages of your screenplay. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays, analyzed over 3,000 scripts as a script analyst, and sold five screenplays.
MY SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: One writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Screenplay Competition while another acquired one million dollars in funding and I helped out a writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions at the box office.
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I charge $250.00 for a comprehensive analysis and take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). Contact me today.
Dan