SCREENWRITERS: Need a Professional Analysis of Your Script? in Sacramento, California For Sale

Detailed script analysis from a screenwriter's point of view that looks at: story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. Avoid common mistakes so the reader can't wait to turn the pages of your script. I've written and rewritten over 30 screenplays, analyzed over 3,000 scripts and sold five screenplays.
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