Stop Rewriting your SCREENPLAY! Get my detailed SCRIPT ANALYSIS now. in Sacramento, California For Sale

Before sending your screenplay to agents, producers, film executives, or screenwriting contests get it into the best shape possible. You only get one first impression.
Most script reading services give you a general story analysis (known as coverage). That's good for agents or producers who don't read scripts, but this is only marginally helpful to the writer who's looking to improve his/her script.
I lead you through each scene to find what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved.
For the last couple years I've been writing, rewriting, and analyzing screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays to date and I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests.
MY SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: One writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Screenplay Competition while another acquired one million dollars in funding and I helped out a writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions at the box office.
I charge $250.00 for a script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan