Written a SCREENPLAY? Get a detailed ANALYSIS before sending it out. in Sacramento, California For Sale

Hello Screenwriters!
The first ten pages of your screenplay must hook a reader at a production company, agency, or screenwriting competition. If you don't reel them in fast then they're probably going to start skimming or worse--stop reading your script all together. I offer a detailed script analysis from a screenwriter's point of view? I can show you how to avoid common mistakes so the reader can't wait to turn the pages of your script. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays, analyzed over 3,000 scripts as a script analyst, and sold five screenplays.
MY SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: One writer won first prize and $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Screenplay Competition. A second writer acquired one million dollars in funding for their film after my analysis. Another writer shot his movie recently after making extensive changes to his script. And finally I helped out a writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions at the box office.
BELOW PLEASE FIND TWO SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE YOU CAN VIEW ONLINE OR DOWNLOAD AND REVIEW AT YOUR LEISURE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
I charge $250.00 for a comprehensive analysis and take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan